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means the user is online now! At 6:51:14 PM on 9/12/2003, Nightmaraptor said: Quick Question Pete. How do you get your story logo on there? I have one for mine but I dont know how to post it with the fic.
"It looks like a lizard."
LAM
At 5:07:50 PM on 9/12/2003, Nightmaraptor said: Sorry about not commenting sooner, but I guess I thought that there wasn't much left to say, this first part got off at a <i>terrific</i> start! I especially like Shea's situation and I would also like to know where he comes in the stroy. Great so far!
"It looks like a lizard."
LAM
At 1:20:04 AM on 9/2/2003, yvonne said: You never cease to amaze me, Pete. This was a wonderful read, so far! My only regret was not reading it all sooner. Sorry about that.
You've created some very intriguing characters. And the details are so wonderfully vivid. Shea is a very nicely developed character. I think he's a good hero for the story.
I'm looking forward to Shea possibly meeting up with Sheila. Although I didn't like Sheila at first ... the way she got so into the whole military stuff was cool, so now I kind of like her.
All the details about the gas masks was nifty, too. Did you look all that stuff up or just take some creative licensing?
All in all, excellent story so far. I'm looking forward to more. :)
At 1:09:07 AM on 8/30/2003, Parasaur.w said: To answer your question Vito, this story is no way related to RE the movie, or RE the game(s). It's an entirely original scenario. No recurring characters, settings, or problems. Same monsters though! >:D
At 3:07:17 PM on 8/29/2003, Vito_The_White said: That was very interesting dude. I really am enjoying all of the characters that you've created for this fan fic.
I do have a question though. Is this story in any way related to the movies or is it in some way related to the games and with whichever one it's related to, how is it related?
Anyway, your discriptions are very good, and I really like the blue text items that you have inserted throughout the story as well. That in itself makes it seem even more Resident Evil related.
Nice job dude. I can't wait to read the next part.
At 1:05:22 PM on 8/29/2003, JPJunkee said: Very nice, Pete. Your writing is full of detail and yet it flows so well and is very easy to read. Nice pacing, too. I’m enjoying this story very much, so far. I particularly like Shelia’s story right now, as well, it is quite suspenseful (and will only become more so as the story progresses) and there are lots of big guns! Hehe. . . Shea and his brother Kelly are also interesting to read about, I wonder where they will come into play later on. . .
I anxiously look forward to more.
-- JPJunkee
At 7:16:44 PM on 8/28/2003, Seth Rex said: Great Fic. turning out quite well.
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