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Another nicely written part. I have to admit to needing to go back and refresh my memory though, by revisiting part one. I got a few of the characters slightly confused for some reason.
But that's all better now! :)
The thing that sticks out in my mind the most with this part is Lamont and his new dog friend, Lucky. It was very easy to picture all of it. And you leaving a cliffhanger at the end there with Morgan was good, too.
It's a pleasure to read what you write, Pete. Keep it up!
At 6:23:59 PM on 10/24/2003, JPJunkee said:
Very, very nice work, Pete. I especially liked the scene with Lamont and the dog. I thought it was kind of funny how the dog kills the zombie then just trots back to Lamont and wags its tail, hehe. The boardroom scene with Doyle was also very good. I liked the short bit with Montague at the end of that, really quite eerie. And what has happened to Morgan? Ooooo, I want to know -- though I think I've got a pretty good idea! Very nice descriptive writing. Some of it is actually quite humorous, but then it can jump right into the somewhat frightening and creepy in an instant. Very good. Post more soon, please! :)
-- JPJunkee
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