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At 9:38:57 PM on 4/7/2003, drucifer67 said:
I mentioned a Tarantino influence when I'd only read part of the story, and I'm not changing horses now--it seems you're a fan. I see Reservoir Dogs and hear Pulp Fiction in every paragraph. You've captured that gritty, darkly realistic world in this story in a way that reflects Tarantino's down-and-dirty style and perhaps even rivals it--yet you've created something here that, despite those similarities, remains your very own.
::The apartment was a good twenty minutes away, but they’d make it in ten.::
I was already visualizing Harvey Keitel driving the car (a la Reservoir Dogs), then you pop out with this Winson Wolf-ism :)
And Luther Shores...the name alone ranks him in with that world populated with Nice Guy Eddies and Marcellus Spiveys.
This is good, and I have a feeling it's going to get better.
Keep going! (And tell Luther I commented, I need my legs)
At 9:30:23 PM on 4/7/2003, yvonne said:
Pete, I'm been a fan of your writing for a while now, and this simply cements that. I was so glad to see your name in the fanfiction section again. :)
The characters are interesting, the situations were well written out, and it was an overall entertaining read so far.
I found it kind of funny that Robby was complaining about being shot at the beginning, and then you learn that he had shot Larry, as well. He has some nerve complaining about the "no guns" rule. lol.
And my personal favorite sentence in this part: "He flopped down lifelessly onto the white leather of the back seat, betraying the faint animation he'd just displayed."
It's descriptions like the above that make your writings so great to read.
Good job. Looking forward to "Saturday" :)
At 5:04:59 PM on 4/7/2003, ERIC said:
I loved how you paced this story. This is very dark, and interesting. Can't wait to read more. :)
At 5:20:54 PM on 4/6/2003, RaptorHiss said:
I liked it personally, it's nice to get away from dinos, and read about Coke and blood:)
At 1:44:26 AM on 4/6/2003, Majestic-1 said:
Very good. Could've used a bit more description of settings and whatnot. But now after reading it, I feel like watching Reservoir Dogs, heh.
At 1:40:53 AM on 4/6/2003, dark hunter said:
enjoyable, it was very well done, liked it how it flashed back, then forward a bit, quite good, keep it up man.
~Dark Hunter
At 1:29:41 AM on 4/6/2003, RaptorVinny500 said:
fuck fuck fuck fuck, mother mother fuck :)
At 1:25:11 AM on 4/6/2003, JPJunkee said:
Dark, serious, and very atmospheric. I liked every bit of it. The language was pushing it a bit at times, but it was necessary to tell the story.
I look forward to more!
-- JPJunkee
At 1:05:34 AM on 4/6/2003, Vader said:
Very intense, and very dark. I want more . . . NOW. He he, ;)
At 12:46:18 AM on 4/6/2003, RaptorVinny500 said:
Awesome story. Keep writing.
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