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Thanks for the comments, I'll have up to chapter 9 and possibly more by the end of next week. And I promise description and grammar will get better by the end of 9.
At 8:08:54 PM on 2/28/2002, Nick Van Owen said:
I'm guessing C+ would be 7.
At 8:01:20 PM on 2/28/2002, Icebreaker said:
<font color=skkyblue>Instead of commenting on EACH chapter I will just comment on this one...though I HAVE read all three. I think it was decent work though it lacked description. I didn't really like the grammar but oh well...itz better then most stuff I see around here.
I am gonna have to go wit Ambrose on this one...
C+</font>
At 6:32:42 PM on 2/28/2002, Ambrose said:
A solid 7
At 5:26:21 PM on 2/28/2002, Nick Van Owen said:
Yeah I thought it was a bit bad, I wrote it two years ago and my skills weren't up to par then.
The chapters will be a bit like this until the middle of chapter 9 (Where I have to continue from when I left off last September).
So what would you say the rating would be on excitement?
At 4:59:58 PM on 2/28/2002, Ambrose said:
Now time for some suggestions. Please don't shoot me :o)
Okay action was good, but could be more discriptive. I Like the charcters and writting style. Try to also make dialogue sound like you are talking to a freind. It seems a little bit robotic at times. But overall this is very cool.
I give this chapter a C+ Average. ;o)
At 4:13:45 PM on 2/28/2002, Nick Van Owen said:
Please tell me your comments and rate how exciting the chapter was on a scale of 1-10.
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