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means the user is online now! At 12:21:13 PM on 6/20/2003, MuldoonLives15 said: Thanks, I'll work on it! :)
At 5:37:11 AM on 6/20/2003, Strider_Aragorn said: I think you need to explain who's where and who they're talking to and how.
Another thing, that's important: character development. It doesnt matter if they die instantly, you need to explain about all of the characters. Just giving them a defining attribute will help the reader relate to the people.
Good work, I look forward to reviewing this!
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