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I loved your story, spent a few hours reading it, beginning to end. :) You're a very talented writer, first off, you actually were able to keep me off balance enough so I didn't know what was going to happen next.
Secondly, I found myself becoming attached to some of the original characters, in particular, Micheal Nedry. (He died ;.;)
The only complaint I have is that Billy died! *sobs* (That's probably becuz he's my fav. character, but y'know...) and I would've felt better knowing what happened to the rest of the people aboard the helicopter. Maybe, maybe, there are more survivors we don't know about? *bats eyelashes* Billy not dead? Billy not dead?
At 1:38:03 PM on 6/28/2002, jango raptor said:
i dont quite understand...when did grant die?
At 12:44:24 PM on 6/26/2002, Mr Goodbytes said:
Yeah, I missed those somehow... Oh, and it'll be part 3. :)
At 9:38:25 AM on 6/26/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
I'm half way through and loving it!
At 8:26:42 AM on 6/26/2002, Jedi A. Malcolm said:
With the exception of small but consistent grammatical errors, this was a well-written fic. It kept me entertained until the end. I'll be looking for part II.
At 7:48:23 AM on 6/26/2002, Mr Goodbytes said:
Yeah, I had to make Ellie hurt more for Grant's supposed death, and I knew that she would need to lose someone close to her in order to hurt even more. So, I made the needed changes to LFAW to keep the continuity.
P.S. I'm reading Chap. 30 of NB right now!
At 1:09:35 AM on 6/26/2002, yvonne said:
That was a nice little extra, the Mark thing. And I loved the new sneak peak, too. Oh my God, they cremated Grant?? Hopefully, it's all a mistake.
Thanks for the 2nd sneak peak Mr Goodbytes. :)
At 8:13:14 PM on 6/25/2002, Mr Goodbytes said:
This is a Special Sneak Peek at JP6: Survival of the Fittest.
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Chapter 1 part 2: Morgue
“What the hell do you mean,” Ellie Degler screamed at the top of her lungs.
“We are sorry Dr. Degler,” said the orderly in English, “Our records say that he was cremated by mistake.”
“How do you cremate a body by mistake,” Malcolm asked shaking his head in disbelief.
“The orderly on call picked up the wrong chart…”
“What is a crematory doing in a hospital anyway?”
“Well,” the Orderly said, “Many families cannot afford the cost of a burial, so we provide it as a free service.”
Ellie began crying, and turned away. She headed down the hall with tears streaming down her face. Ellie had lost Mark in a car accident just two months earlier. Her children and Alan were all that she had left. If it wasn’t for Alan, she would have been in pieces. He kept her calm, and she knew that he loved her. She loved him also. Ellie wasn’t prepared to lose him again.
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