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I like where the storys going. Great job! I think I'm going to read chapter 3 and 4 again, since their my favorite chapters so far.
At 3:23:54 PM on 8/4/2004, Edgar said:
My character is just so nice! He loves to share his money with everyone.
“Edgar will pay for it,” Ben said.
“What? No I won’t!” Edgar said.
LOL! Good chapter. :)
-e
At 1:37:01 AM on 8/4/2004, Carna said:
I went back and read the previous installments. I think this sites Dan-fics are the only thing keeping this section alive(aside from authors like Chase and Jeff). I'm very impressed by this Mr Camel. Quite funny, easy storyline to pick up on. The only peeve I have is that, with nearly all of this story in dialogue, it might have been easier if you wrote it in script form. Nonetheless, it isn't much of an issue.
Keep it up, great work!
At 10:20:20 PM on 8/3/2004, HockeyDude said:
Great Job!!!
Thanks for letting me be in it again!
Nice Work!
=)
At 6:22:29 PM on 8/3/2004, fordprefect said:
Hey, you got something good going on here... I've got to find the earlier chapters...I enjoyed this
P.S, This is the first fan-fic that i've appeared in. Even my own Dan Fic doesn't have me in it. I owe you Camel.
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