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So many angry violent people! I think at this rate, that by the end of the story, only maybe three people will be left alive. Pretty cool stuff, Mr. C. I noticed lots of Monty Python bits in this (I counted three I think), and they were probably the funniest parts of the chapter -- and fit into the story very well, too. My favorite part was the death of Evolutiosaurus -- it's sometimes difficult to make a death of a character funny, but this one was. Anyway, good job writing another fun chapter. :)
At 11:48:54 PM on 5/20/2004, hunter2.0 said:
dude! awsome! I get a M-16? Thanks. oh, and if the marines turn out to be bad, I call killing Aragorn! Aragorn, I have nothing against you, but in this story, your the best. And I HAVE to beat the best. Or I can kill the Cuban captain! That would also be preferable- if he is not dead. Oh, right. Love the story, and I promise to watch it to the end, if you promise to watch my story to the end. Everyone-I need comments! Thanks to Mr. Camel and one other guy i have some, but that isnt enough. Come on, please read my story. It is obviously A Soldiers Duty. Now, I am sorry for spaming this comment section with my advertising. Brought to you by Crispy Creames! The one way ticket to happy obesity! :)
At 6:13:09 PM on 5/19/2004, SpinoMonkey said:
lol Your welcome, great chapter!
At 4:07:48 PM on 5/19/2004, HockeyDude said:
Good Job!!!
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