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This is really good! I like how all of the characters are, and the plot is interesting. Keep up the good work!
At 5:24:59 AM on 12/19/2003, dark hunter said:
great chapter.
The emotion went into overload in that chapter, though don't the police usually stay in case the kidnappers call...?
Development of characters was excellent and your writing is good as well.
Great story so far :)
~Dark Hunter
At 5:19:02 PM on 11/26/2003, yvonne said:
Another good chapter! And now that everything is in place, things will heat up I'm sure.
I'll read more when I get the chance. :)
Oh and btw, I think it's 'Dodgson' too. That's how it's spelled in The Lost World (novel)
And you might want to fix up the grammar/spelling in chapter 1 when you get the chance. First chapters make a huge impression, so you want it to be spiffy.
So far though, I really like this story. :)
At 9:28:52 PM on 11/19/2003, JPfan4life said:
Thanks Chris! lol
Ya, I wonder who did that logo? It's pretty ugly! no just joking of course!! It looks great!
At 5:22:31 PM on 11/19/2003, SpinoMonkey said:
Nice logo I wonder who did that? hehe. Looks good.
Chapter is awesome!
~SpinoMonkey~
At 4:52:22 PM on 11/11/2003, JPfan4life said:
MartinRandle: Yeah, I was going to put a link in my post on the message board, but i dont know how... :-\
JPjunkee - you can count on Grant kicking some ass!! :D
Troodontid - I believe it is spelled Dodgeson, according to everyone else who writes his name anyway (?)
Thank you All for reading and your comments!! they are definitly appreciated!
At 5:59:32 AM on 11/10/2003, MartinRandle said:
Yes I like the way this is going...
However on an unrelated point. When you post your thread about the latest episode include a link to the location, this will encourage the laziest of readers to find it.
At 8:27:26 PM on 11/9/2003, Troodontid said:
Pretty awesome chapter in your story, starting out slow is the best strtegy so you can surprise the readers over and over again later.
One thing I think its spelled 'Dodgson' not 'Dodgeson'. I'm a perfectionist, sorry.
At 3:19:49 PM on 11/9/2003, JPfan4life said:
Thanks a lot!
At 2:02:19 PM on 11/9/2003, JPJunkee said:
Good stuff! I especially liked the scene with Dodgeson and Jack, it was cool because Dodgeson seemed to really enjoy antagonizing Jack and stuff, and Jack's reactions to it all were entertaining, hehe. The things with Chelsea were nice, too. I liked how she tried to spark a conversation to make her seem more human, made the scene interesting. Grant and Ellie parts were also nice. They're worried beyond words, and it works well. I'm liking where the story is headed so far. It should be cool if and when Grant and Dodgeson (or Donovan or Jack) meet up. I hope Grant kicks some ass! hehe . . . Keep it up. :)
-- JPJunkee
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