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Well first I want to point out something:
"Vader sighed, "Did you do kill another one of your patients? You're a psychiatrist, Junkee. When your patients die, questions about you and your methods arise.""
A small typo near the beginning of that. Just thought I'd point that out.
""And you call me. . . . why?""
Is that supposed to be 'called'? if not, just ignor me.
Now, onto the good things:
Damn funny.
is it just me, or did Yvonne seem more like a little child thena nything else, lol. I could easily see this being a cartoon or anime.
I loved the Mickeymike humor. (Always do, lol).
I think, though, it should have been Junkee doing tehe actions at the very end, not Vader,m just because it seemed like something that Junkee would do, not Vader, but its no bigge. Anyway, good job on Part 1.
At 2:18:05 PM on 3/17/2003, Ben said:
Very nice...LMAO...Junkee...keep it up man.
At 12:33:35 PM on 3/17/2003, CeratosPit said:
Junkee, U R 1 funny mother f*cker!
At 7:41:20 AM on 3/17/2003, MartinRandle said:
What I am not in it????
Bah!
Superb stuff JPJ you just made my Monday morning a really sunny one. (Oh and the sun helped too).
martin
At 7:13:47 AM on 3/17/2003, spielberg1213 said:
Junkee-
Amazing! That was damn funny! I have tears,lol. Awesome job! cant wait for the next episodes.
-S
At 4:52:44 AM on 3/17/2003, dark hunter said:
hehe, loved it Junkee.
Pure class, literally, funniest scene was the yvonne, and window scene, with the cheese and wine, heeheehee
~Dark Hunter
At 1:11:08 AM on 3/17/2003, yvonne said:
Wow. That's all I can say between the laughing. That was pure comedy genius. Really.
There's so much to love here, that if I copied and pasted everything that made me laugh out loud .... just about the whole story would be here. lol.
I cannot wait for more episodes, Junkee. I needed a good laugh and you provided it for me in spades. :)
Bravo to you!
At 1:06:13 AM on 3/17/2003, Vader said:
LMAO, that was great. Harkens back to the days of purely-loony comedies that were abundant in Late 2000.
Great job - you made me laugh.
At 12:48:58 AM on 3/17/2003, JPJunkee said:
Okay, I would first like to say, that this whole story was written out of fun, I mean NO offense to anyone. You may be surprised to see your name in this story, since there was no casting. No permission was ever given to me to use the names, and I never asked for any. I hope this does not bother anyone. Anyway, I just wanted to say, that before you grow angry about your character being a stupid looney, or being killed or whatever. . . .it's all just for fun and a few (hopefully) laughs. Thank you.
-- JPJunkee
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