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I'm still loving it. Can't wait to find out what happens next. I agree with the others about how great the story is moving along. I am eager to read more.
At 12:45:25 AM on 1/9/2003, JPJunkee said:
Thanks for the comment, Vito. I'm glad you're enjoying this.
And by the way, don't be expecting to see Eric Kirby in any part of this story. Sorry.
-- JPJunkee
At 10:58:22 AM on 1/4/2003, Vito_The_White said:
Alright! One of my all time favorite JP characters in it now! Dr. Ian Malcolm, Dr. Henry Wu! How much better could it get!... Well, maybe with Eric Kirby, but anyway.
I love how the story is progressing. You really know what's your trying to do with this and just seems to get better all the time.
Great job with this part, now I'll read the third:)
At 12:37:43 PM on 12/16/2002, JPJunkee said:
Thanks for the comment, Dino_Dude.
And I will say, that Malcolm and the others backgrounds and stories will be told. They're not all there just for comic releif or dino chow, or whatever.
-- JPJunkee
At 7:13:32 AM on 12/16/2002, Dino_Dude said:
Ah, yet another intriguing installment. I like how things are moving along, the pace continues at a good rate. I like the situation that Wu has been put in, and I await to see how it turns out. And it's also cool to see Malcolm again, though I too hope you explain his reasons for coming along. As for the other guys, well, they just seem like your typical mercenaries, unless of course they get some of their own development further down the track.
I am also glad to see more of the Reporter and her Cameraman. I felt they needed more development if they were going to be part of the story, and it seems now that they are.
I look forward to more, as to see how all the views and different characters mould into one solid story. :)
Overall, I am continuing to enjoy this nicely written story. Keep up the good work!
Cheers,
~ Dino_Dude ~
At 11:48:26 PM on 12/11/2002, JPJunkee said:
Thank-you for the comment, friend Bry Bry.
-- JPJunkee
At 4:46:33 PM on 12/11/2002, Jedi A. Malcolm said:
Nicely done, friend Kyle. I look forward to future installments.
8/10
At 1:34:54 PM on 12/11/2002, JPJunkee said:
Thanks for the comments.
:)
-- JPJunkee
At 1:24:32 AM on 12/11/2002, dark hunter said:
cool story man, very well written and moving extremely well, i especially liked how you're adding every character to the story and twisting each plot around each other, and intwining the characters.
It's great how the story's working out, i would like to find out why malcolm's back and what's going to happen to Wu, this story is very well done.
Rating: 7 1/2 /10
~Dark Hunter
At 12:42:28 AM on 12/11/2002, yvonne said:
I'm really liking this story. It's moving along rather nicely and I like some of the new characters, too. Leah and Brunell mostly. Leah is pretty much stereotypical, but she's likable to me. :)
And the part where you explain how Madison is eating ... a great visual there. Made it very easy to picture him in my head.
And now Malcolm is involved, too. Grant and Malcolm together will surely be fun to read later on. :)
Very good and very entertaining.
At 12:30:48 AM on 12/11/2002, Vader said:
Good work - you did a good job of showing what is going on inside the character's heads, I felt. The story is sort of typical-JP, and I would have liked a tad more description.
Overall, NICE WRITING. :D
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