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"Comments are appreciated"
They are are they?? well in that case you're not getting one :P
JUST KIDDING
This was another great addition, as jmock said the way the cloned animals were portrayed was excellent.
Wu's dead, a great twist, now they have absolutely no idea whereto go, i love it when things like this happen as it makes the will to survive even more so.
This story is like a good wine, it gets better with age, obviously as this story progresses it gets better.
9/10
~Dark Hunter
At 12:14:21 AM on 2/27/2003, JPJunkee said:
Thanks Yvonne and jmock5!
-- JPJunkee
At 8:16:37 PM on 2/15/2003, jmock5 said:
I love the way you portrayed the cloned animals. I really felt bad for each one.
This story is still amazing. Can't wait to read more.
At 3:20:48 PM on 2/6/2003, yvonne said:
The spino sequence was very well written! Very suspenseful and very disgusting. In short, it was great! :)
Wu dying was a shock to me, as well. Killing off someone that you had been using as the centerpiece for a lot of story, made me really wonder what other person you might have Dodgson kill. Again, it made for some excellent suspense.
And I think the Grant and Leah thing is cute. It's about time he got on with his life and moved on. Although, the reporter does seem to distract him somewhat, which could get him into some trouble later.
The story flows so nicely. It really is a pleasure to read it. Thanks for giving all of us a chance to do just that, JPJunkee. :)
At 11:07:23 PM on 2/5/2003, JPJunkee said:
Thanks for the comments, Vito and Vader! They're greatly appreciated
I'm glad that the spino scene was found to be entertaining, I enjoyed writing it. I like the nasty stuff. hehe
And I was kind of thinking that the death of Wu would not be taken well. In the story, I knew I was going to have to kill him, and killing him now was really the only opportune time. Because soon enough, the story will be moving very fast, and his death would not have been correct to have put in later on. So, he died now. At least it came as a surprise and shock, like I was hoping.
Thanks for the comments!
-- JPJunkee
At 10:43:41 PM on 2/5/2003, Vader said:
Great chapter! I loved the Spinosaurus sequence, but since you've really let us live this story through Wu, its sad to see him die - which shows you have the talent to make us feel for a character.
Keep it up!
At 7:00:27 PM on 2/5/2003, Vito_The_White said:
Wow. All I can really say is wow. Man I don't know know what to say.
The Spinosaurus stuff at the beginning was unbelievable. That would littarily scare the shit out of me if that were to have actually been part of a movie. All of the guts and blood is just nasty, and believing that the animal was dead to start with, and then, all of a sudden, he's alive! Dang that's a lot man. Really spooky.
First second and third generation dinosaurs, now mixing dinosaurs with animals of our time? Dodgson and the rest of Biosyn have really lost their minds. I mean, that just wasn't suspected.
I like the little dog add in, expecially when he leads the team away from the Velociraptors:) That would add for a little bit of humor during the actual attack.
I hated to read Wu's death. I seriously thought that if you did decide to kill him, that it wouldn't have been till later, and other people from the team would've been killed first, but that was really surprising.
Overall, another great, but gross stage. I can't wait to read the next one man. It's all really exciting.
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