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a lot better then the last chapter, Dodgson's character is extremely well written, and he seems real.
The only problem with this chapter was the whole "why'd you tell us that?"..."isn't it obvious im going to kill you" bit. It was just cliched, not that it is a bad thing, but it was still cliched,i enjoyed it though.
8.5/10
~Dark Hunter
At 11:18:04 AM on 3/5/2003, JPJunkee said:
Thanks for the comment, jmock5!
-- JPJunkee
At 12:38:22 AM on 2/15/2003, jmock5 said:
Very, very entertaining. I love it. Can't wait to read more.
At 9:09:26 AM on 1/13/2003, JPJunkee said:
Thanks for the comments, everyone!
-- JPJunkee
At 4:53:46 PM on 1/12/2003, Vito_The_White said:
It took me awhile to finish this, because I was doing several other things, but this part was extremely good and the adventure doesn't seem to let me down as we go along. It keeps getting better and better with each sentence.
I hope Malcolm wasn't forseeing his own death. That would be horrible. I also hope that Wu lives in the end, even though he betrayed Hammond.
Anyway, this was another great instalment. Great job man. Can't wait for the next part.
At 6:54:41 AM on 1/12/2003, Neelis said:
Finally! I have been checking up daily only for this story! Its a true adventure, and really exiting. Can't wait for the rest of it.
At 2:25:31 AM on 1/12/2003, yvonne said:
It's great how you switch from all the different characters, and give detailed viewpoints of each.
And some of the inner thoughts of Wu, were very good. Ex. "In his sleep, he drempt of dinosaurs, and about how they were slaughtering him as he slept." It adds to his character very well.
And now it looks as though the Leah/Aaron duo, will finally meet up with Grant and company.
The story only gets better and better, after each Stage, JPJunkee. :)
At 1:52:46 AM on 1/12/2003, Vader said:
Very enjoyable/entertaining read. I really like how you handle each character, once again, and I think the dialogue is probably one of the higher points of this story.
This is flowing along well, and I look forward to the next installment. :)
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