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im very happy, we finally see some dino action. :)
i like it how no one knows what they're doing or where they are going, it makes a nice addition instead of everyone just going we're they know too. It makes it harder in the future.
I liked the action and especially what the two mercenaries did at the end, its a very human emotion.
I also must say it is good to finally see a bad guy injured so early as it rarely ever happens.
9/10
~Dark Hunter
At 9:42:59 PM on 3/5/2003, JPJunkee said:
Well thank you very much, jmock5! I'm happy to see you're enjoying the story. :)
-- JPJunkee
At 2:18:26 AM on 2/15/2003, jmock5 said:
I have to agree with everyone who posted below. Grant's dream was amazing. And all the characters are cool. I also feel Dogdson might be alive and that there's something going on between Leah and Grant.
i can't wait to read more: )
At 2:17:08 PM on 1/21/2003, JPJunkee said:
Thanks for the comment, Yvonne. :)
For me, I always pictured that Alan and Ellie brokeup over the JP incident. For some reason, it was the only thing that made sense to me. And I'm glad it made sense to someone else as well.
As for Leah and Alan. . . .I'm not going to say anything. . . . ehh, I said too much already! Dang!
You're a clever one, Yvonne.
-- JPJunkee
At 7:16:45 PM on 1/19/2003, yvonne said:
Wow. Quite a lot of things happened in this stage. :)
All the good guys are together now, and they make for an interesting bunch. :)
Reading about how you dealt with the Grant and Ellie break-up was interesting, too. It was very inventive.
Lots of gun fighting action in this stage, as well as some dinos. I love how you write action. It's very easy for me to picture what's going on.
And hmmm, Leah and Alan. They seem to be getting closer, which is an interesting character development for the both of them. I'll be watching these two. :)
Overall, an excellent addition to the story, JPJunkee!
At 9:48:48 PM on 1/18/2003, JPJunkee said:
Thanks for the comments, Vader and Vito. They're really appreciated!
Vader: I spent a long while trying to think up Brenson's name and make it appopriate to his character. I'm glad it paid off. LoL
And Vito: Wow, big comment. And a comment of high praise no less! Thanks a lot for the comment, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much. :)
-- JPJunkee
At 10:32:04 AM on 1/18/2003, Vito_The_White said:
Just amazing man. Just like Vader, I'm really loving how Wu's character is evolving. I mean I loved him in the first JP and he was only one for like five minutes. You're just getting better and better with him.
I loved the gun fights and the grenade part. That's something we have yet to see in a JP film, and that would be very interesting to see. I also bet Dodgson isn't dead yet right? He'll have a come back, I can feel it in my gut.
You really had me feeling bad for Grant man. Everything going through his mind in this stage was very saddening to me. Expecially the dream he had about his dad. And then the explaination about why Grant and Ellie aren't together just makes it even more sad.
I wish Malcolm wasn't the way he's been though. Malcolm is my second favorite JP character and I hate to see him like this. It's all really sad. I just hope everything will be ok with that.
My favorite dinosaurs, the Dilophosaurus made an appearance! I wasn't expecting that. That's really cool!
Ms. Owens' character is getting more enjoyable for me now as well, because I'm actually starting to picture Courtney Cox Arquette(Gale Weathers) in the role. Believe me man, coming from me, that's a good thing.
The story keeps getting better and better man. I can't wait for the next installment. Great job:)
At 1:31:58 AM on 1/18/2003, Vader said:
I love how you're developing Wu's character throughout the story, its great following him around. LOL @ Mac Brenson - that's a perfect name for a fat engineer. :D
Excellent installment. :)
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