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awsome Junkee!!!!
At 7:10:50 AM on 4/6/2003, dark hunter said:
"Scavenger my ass" funniest line ever, that made my day, seriously.
This was the best chapter yet, loved the whole Allosaurs too afraid to go near their cages and the battle between the two rexes was amazing.
also although i havent written about it yet, the character development is incredible, we see each character slowly evolving into something else, and it is great.
The dog is also a welcome new addition to the story as it gives us an incite into what normal animals think of the extinct ones. It's great
9.5/10
~Dark Hunter
At 3:44:32 AM on 2/16/2003, jmock5 said:
Awesome!!
I just started reading this story a couple days ago and I guess I'm finally caught up. I love it all. The characters, dinosaurs, and dialogue are great. I also love the Rex's fight, Grant's line, and the dog that follows the crowd around. This stage was a little short but the entertainment was probably the highest.
Now, for the first time I must wait for the next installment. This doesn't matter because I'm sure the next stages will be great.
I'll be on the look out for the following chapters.
At 1:31:43 AM on 2/15/2003, JPJunkee said:
Thanks for reading, Vader! Greatly appreciated.
Oh, and I agree with 'em too.
-- JPJunkee
At 2:17:13 PM on 2/14/2003, Vader said:
A very enjoyable chapter. The Dinosaur battle was well described, and as the other readers did, I got a kick out of Grant's little remark (I agree with 'em too. ;)
Keep up the good work, Junkee. :)
At 1:33:13 PM on 2/12/2003, JPJunkee said:
Thanks a lot for the comment Yvonne!
-- JPJunkee
At 1:37:25 AM on 2/12/2003, yvonne said:
It was definitely shorter, but not any less entertaining. :)
Dodgson is still alive ... and will be able to wreak havic on the good guys some more! Yay! lol.
I really like how you remember to mention the dog. Little details like this, are a big plus IMO. So good job!
The dino fight between the two Rexes was very fun to read as well. As Vito said, a very good choice of words in that part. And I liked how Grant kind of stayed around to watch the dino battle, too.
I'm really enjoying this tale you're weaving. Keep it up! :)
At 11:15:32 PM on 2/11/2003, JPJunkee said:
Thanks for the comment Vito! I'm happy you were entertained.
I'm glad you liked the "Scavenger, my as!" line, I liked it too. I almost thought it may be too corny and I pondered over cutting it from the story, but I liked it a lot, so I kept it. Good thing!
And I'm happy to see that you enjoyed what I did with the rex in the story.
And you are right, this was a shorter stage compared to some of the ones of the past. But, I felt I had told everything I had needed to tell, and so I kept the rest for the two remaining stages.
Thanks for reading! I look forward to seeing your comments on future installments!
-- JPJunkee
At 4:56:13 PM on 2/11/2003, Vito_The_White said:
""Scavenger, my ass!" Grant growled."
I laughed my ass off at that man! That one of the most hilliarious things I've ever read. Great line.
Dodgson is such a jackass. I can't believe that Grant missed! It's just not fair. I was actually shocked though when I thought that Dodgson was going to commit suicide. I really didn't expect that from his character, but he did change his mind, which I was hoping he wouldn't, but oh well.
I enjoyed the battle of the normal Rex and the G2 Rex. That was very well worded and I could really picture that. It seemed really cool for Grant to stay behind and finish watching the kill before he went on. That is very much in his character.
The Carnotaurs death was quite good also. I believe that you helped to revive the Tyrannosaurs reputation from the aweful thing that happened to him in JP3. I believe that if the audience was disapointed about that before, that they'd be very pleased with all that the Rex was able to accomplish in the second chapter of this stage.
This did seem like a much shorter stage compared to the others that I've read in the past, but that's ok. It was still really good. Can't wait for the next part man. Great job!
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