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Wow... this is genuinly funny material here Kyle. Your take on "Jurassic Park" with a comedic aspect works and has me laughing on almost every occasion.
"HOST!" Yvonne screamed. "Host, where are you?! HOST!"
Snake-Mark looked at Yvonne with a frown, "Shouldn't you be calling the name of your boyfriend?"
"Ehhh," Yvonne shrugged her shoulders.
Snake smiled, "Clever girl."
LoL!
Each character proves to be relevant to the comedy generated in this FanFic, which isn't something you see every day. Sometimes you'll have a character that's just along for the ride and used as nothing more than scenery without meaningful dialogue. This was a great installment to the story and I hope to read more soon!
At 10:48:04 AM on 9/8/2003, Amber said:
lol. stupid penguins goin to take me out? lol. saved by the keg!!!
woohoo... ! good stuff and a good chapter too...
At 12:37:05 AM on 9/8/2003, JPJunkee said:
Good to have ya back, Martin! And I'm glad you enjoyed what you read upon your return! I value your comments a great deal, so thanks a lot. :)
-- JPJunkee
At 3:15:17 PM on 9/7/2003, MartinRandle said:
Well i'm back and I have just read episodes 8 & 9 in succession.
Mad sheer brilliance.
Your comedic skills are unsurpassed.
Classic moments - the pink T-rex attack - the whole scene was side splitting.
Dialogue like host's "Be compelled to depart expeditiously,"
And the french dilo spitting battle. Brilliant - Laugh out loud so!
I love the way my character is turning into Gandalf.
At 8:39:58 PM on 9/6/2003, JPJunkee said:
Woo! Thanks guys! :)
-- JPJunkee
At 7:48:56 PM on 9/6/2003, DarialLongsword said:
Love it!
At 8:25:38 PM on 9/5/2003, SpinoMonkey said:
cool! I loved it!
~SpinoMonkey~
~Yeah the dude from the USA~
At 3:50:34 PM on 9/5/2003, Mr.Camel said:
LOL!!!
Great work!
At 2:52:05 PM on 9/5/2003, JPJunkee said:
Hey thanks all!
Yes, Dark Hunter, of course the penguin can breathe fire. . . Don’t they all? *Twilight Zone music begins to play* Hehe, thanks for reading, DH, and I’m really, really happy you’re enjoying it as much as you are. A score of 10 . . . Hot diggity! :D
Woo! Yvonne. . . The person who writes the longest comments in the world! Hehe Thanks for reading! And I love it how your comments point out particular parts of the episode, not only is it good to know what parts made ya laugh, but it also tells me what sort of humor I should possibly try to replicate or strive for in the future episodes. So, thank you very much as usual, and I’m glad you found what you read entertaining! . . . Oh! Oh! And I should say, Yvonne was the one who suggested the French dilo, as before the dilo just had a lot of dirty language, which.. . .wasn’t that funny. But, a French lizard (AKA a biscotti) is better than a thug lizard any day! Hehe, so thank you to Yvonne for that suggestion! :)
And Darth Chicken! I’m happy you decided to check out the story! And also of course happy you enjoyed! Thanks a lot! :)
-- JPJunkee
At 1:52:14 PM on 9/5/2003, Darth Chicken said:
That was friggin hilarious! Great work!
At 1:26:52 PM on 9/5/2003, yvonne said:
Awesome as usual!
I'm starting to like the Junkee/DH conversations just as much as the Host/AG5 talks, which is good, since Host and AG5 are now separated. DH's split-personality disorder is friggin hilarious! His other half is evil, yet more like a 5 year old. hehe
Martin's rambles are wonderful! Some of what he says in this part, I remember from the trailer. It was funny then, and even more funny now, since it's in the proper context now.
And I loved this small bit of dialogue between Dru and Martin:
"Will I die?"
"More than likely."
"Dammit."
LoL!
I think my favorite part this time around was the French dilo! And then Amber spitting tobacco at it .... lol! That whole sequence was the most side-splitting IMO. :D
And then there's the Penguin! Woo!... or should I say CRAW!
My character not being able to decide if she's happy or sad about AG5 being dead was great, too! And then AG5 tossing the kids out of the tree. LOL.
I'm not sure how this just keeps getting better, Kyle. You keep topping yourself and I find it great! Can't wait for the next part! :)
At 7:10:26 AM on 9/5/2003, dark hunter said:
Funny as all living hell.
It just keeps getting better and better! The characters are awesome, so diverse yet so crazy! it's awesome. The dialogue is funny as, it always gives me the laughs and the story is so zany.
A penguin that can breath fire? we're all in trouble now.
Rating: 10/10
~Dark Hunter
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