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Damn it, Bish, look what you did!
At 1:08:24 AM on 7/11/2002, Bish said:
holy crap that sucked!
<font color=blue>-Bish
At 12:23:45 AM on 7/11/2002, Neo-the1 said:
I haven't even read it, but I will now, and you know it will suck.
I know it ill suck.
IT SUCKS.
DONT BOTHER IT SUCKS SOOOO BAD GO FUCK YOURSELF ITS MORE PERDUCTIVE THAN THIS SHIT GARBAGE ASS WHORE.
Have a nice day ~NeO~
At 6:49:45 PM on 7/10/2002, Dac said:
J7's fics are crap
He says that we need a slap
But he wrote one day
And lost his way
And dropped to the level of twat
At 12:57:16 PM on 7/10/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
Really, you just had to say you were better than everyone else on this site. That's a Greeeeeeaaaaaaaat way to get people to read your stories!
(Barney theme plays)
At 11:29:10 AM on 7/10/2002, Mr. Chaos said:
Oh, J7, you must not understand what we are all saying, so let me speak slower
T-h-a-t w-a-s a p-i-e-c-e o-f g-o-d d-a-m-n s-h-i-t
-Mr. Chaos, trying to get the memory of this story out of his head
At 10:27:06 AM on 7/10/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
<Times New Roman>HeHe.</Times New Roman>
At 10:25:40 AM on 7/10/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
I think J7 left because he found out how stupid he really was.
At 8:57:29 AM on 7/10/2002, Mr. Chaos said:
If all I had was 1 key working on my keyboard, I could still write a better story
At 9:38:17 PM on 7/9/2002, JPLuNaTiC said:
pure shit.
At 8:26:22 PM on 7/9/2002, Nick Van Owen said:
I just read it, it's worse than before I read it, how does he suddenly know it's a raptor? This is the worst fic I've read. You owe me five minutes of my life.
At 8:20:14 PM on 7/9/2002, Nick Van Owen said:
Pure crap, I didn't even bother to read it, I just felt like telling you off for no particular reason!
At 7:20:59 PM on 7/9/2002, Dac said:
Four words that you will find handy:
Spelling and grammar school!
At 7:00:17 PM on 7/9/2002, Mr. Chaos said:
I heard that if you have a 1000 monkeys at a 1000 typwrites they could, in time, write the works of shakespere.
Your story is 1 monkey given 17 minutes
At 6:58:34 PM on 7/9/2002, Dac said:
I mean, shooting a flare gun at the dinosaur to get rid of it
I mean, grow up! Get your own ideas!
At 6:53:25 PM on 7/9/2002, Dac said:
Crappier and crappier
At 4:06:18 PM on 7/9/2002, Oviraptor said:
Garbage...
At 3:36:45 PM on 7/9/2002, firebird said:
"The first chapter of an epic tail"
its tale, dumbfuck! learn to spell. And yes, this did suck. Better than Crichton my ass!
At 3:26:55 PM on 7/9/2002, Carna [Mod] said:
Honest opinion -
It was <i>bad</i>. Horrible attempts at descriptions. Choppy flow....NO dialogue...No character development.
Youre an amateur writer, face it
At 1:38:47 PM on 7/9/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
I hope you die.
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