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That sucked, u stuffed it up 5 sentences into the story.
At 10:14:22 AM on 5/11/2002, ToNy tHe T-ReX said:
Nicely done, but if it were actually a book, I think it would have to be a little longer. With more of a disasterous action sequence at the end, But good job!
At 11:27:51 PM on 5/10/2002, BRM said:
Nice story, good pacing. One of the best stories I've read. To bad your not writing more.
BTW: Ignore this last section, it is only a test.
I walked into the room and looked at the portrait of the nice lady.
“Hi” I said “You’re pretty.”
She never said anything back to me.
“I always get this reaction,” I frowned “Oh well”
With that, I left, my head shaking slowly. My feelings were stung permanently from this rejection.
At 10:02:49 PM on 5/9/2002, AlanGrant5 said:
I have always seen this fan-fic as surpassing the rest, due to it's great writing, good pace, and intriguing premise. In my honest opinion, this book was my favorite of them all (somewhat proving that the first is always the best). You set a new standard for fan-fiction, creating characters that were heart felt (Thomas and Helena) and had written them in such a way, that they really stood out even more so than the already created character; Hammond. I am sad to hear that this will be the last story you post as I was looking forward to reading TIFFA as well as your James Bond: Shades of Gray fan-fic, but I understand how you feel about the situation. You truely are a great author and it shines through the work you've put into these well thought out stories!
<i>ORIGIN</i>: * * * * [* * * *]
P.S.- I decided to finish the rest of <i>COMPLETION</i> and if at all possible will have it ready by May 24. If you are willing, I'd like to have you edit it, before it is posted.
At 9:52:43 PM on 5/9/2002, RaptorHiss said:
Wow Ice, this certainly is one of you best works ever, it's so good. I love your style of writing, and I'm very sad to see you quit the writing buisiness:(
I wish you luck in the future, and good luck for any writing that you do:)
You truely are a great author
At 6:43:08 PM on 5/9/2002, Chavez said:
My fav. story on the site. Really cooL!! Good way to end your career.
At 5:51:36 PM on 5/9/2002, tobycompy2.0 said:
<font color=Brick red>I salute you, Ice, this has been a very fun time reading your stuff. I'm sorry that you have to go. But, I'm wondering, what about TIFFA?</font>
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-What you just witnessed was the bite of the compy. Goodnight.</font>
<a href=http://www.dansjp3page.com/fanfic/tobycompy2.0-The_Following_Evil_Trilogy__Return_To_The_Castle.asp><font color=Skkyblue>The Following Evil Trilogy: Return to the Castle</font></a>
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