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VERY LATE, I know...
Cool. Good, but <i>I</i> wouldn't call it great. The writing's good, the basic story isn't as original as people say and the action is repetitive. And the second sex scene wasn't necessary, I didn't think it helped the story or character's development.
3.5/5
At 6:07:20 PM on 1/9/2002, Evilgrinch said:
That is so f*cking cool man.
At 9:07:07 PM on 1/6/2002, Dinonut said:
alsome icebreaker...alsome
~Dinonut
The few. The proud. An original member
At 7:53:42 PM on 1/6/2002, Vito Hardy said:
well man that was very interesting!!! I liked the special features. I wish i could have special features, but not many people like my stories so there's no need. i will be paying great interest to you in the future.
At 7:49:44 PM on 1/6/2002, JPLuNaTiC said:
Ok im commenting very late(sry)
and in my opinion Icebreaker IS the king of the fan fics. and this is deffinately his best work and the best of the fics I suggest if you havent read it do so NOW. It is an original JP plotline unlike any here and is well detailed...
At 10:54:18 PM on 1/4/2002, BioSpino said:
Man, how do you get any better than this man, sorry about the late comment.
At 9:33:28 PM on 1/2/2002, Seth Rex said:
ok i'm back here, i read it once before but now i'm posting my comments...great story dude, a classic like LOTR...once for the memory books :)
At 1:47:04 PM on 1/2/2002, (Rob) said:
>I thught you disliked with the latest work<
Huh? I liked the original.
At 1:36:49 PM on 1/2/2002, Illiteration said:
well...I won't lie....I didn't read the whole thing...just some parts....(mostly the authors comments) from what I picked up it's a good story and not only that it has all the special features....wow....
At 12:26:14 PM on 1/2/2002, Jester_Pocus said:
awesome the pics are really cool great job Ice
At 8:01:41 AM on 1/2/2002, taker said:
Absolutely brilliant! One of the best fanfics I've ever read!
Well done.
At 10:48:50 PM on 1/1/2002, RaptorHiss said:
14 comments so far, keep it up!:)
At 10:22:22 PM on 1/1/2002, Jurassiclaw said:
Huh ? I though you disliked with latest work, Chaos.
At 7:04:49 PM on 1/1/2002, Chaos Edge X said:
<font color=Blue>4/5
The writing was perfect. Almost Jurassiclaw-like. Enjoyable, but the special features take away from the overall greatness by distraction.
And, man, that Pierce Brosnan is dreamy . . . what?!</font>
<font color=red>That's the Shark with his Salsa</font>
At 7:02:52 PM on 1/1/2002, RaptorHiss said:
I must say that I love it! I remember reading Death Has No Regret when you first released, and loved it. Now with all the special features, it is great. I love the author's comments, its almost like commentray(sp)in the movies. The poster art if woderful, I love how you used real actors. The story still remains one of the best I have ever seen. You are one of the best authors I have ever read. I hope to read you next stories, Im sure they will be good, if not better, than this one.
At 7:02:36 PM on 1/1/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
Very well done, illustrious content. The only reason I can't say its perfect is the fact Jake could wrestle Raptors, i jus cant see that happenin
At 6:39:16 PM on 1/1/2002, ShadowRex said:
*APPLAUDES ICE*. That thing is awesome, the story always rocked, by that way you've put this together is artistry. 9.5/10 (You don't get a good mark without a lot of effort - so congratulations again..)
-Shadow
At 3:44:04 PM on 1/1/2002, raptorhunter22 said:
Your stories always amaze me Ice, I can never get my eyeballs off the screen.
A+ (Great job Ice, first A+ I've every given)
At 2:49:33 PM on 1/1/2002, AlanGrant5 said:
Wow, this is the first time I read this and I wasn't let down. Very well done Ice, written like a professional.
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At 2:32:55 PM on 1/1/2002, TheGrinch said:
Nice Ice, enjoyed love to see a Second one! :)
-TheGrinch
At 2:16:10 PM on 1/1/2002, Chavez said:
once again u have given us the privilage to read your great work.
At 1:27:49 PM on 1/1/2002, Jurassiclaw said:
<font color=red>Heh, you know I already read that, I'd post my last comment ... Anyway, it still stands. Third on the top 5.
9.0 / 10.0 (You know me, it's VERY rare I give something that high)
The comments/interview was a good idea, though it was done before, people'll probably start doing it as well.
Probably your best work, with Origin not far behind.
At 1:00:20 PM on 1/1/2002, Vader said:
Wow! I really enjoyed that! I especially loved reading your commentaries. Good work!
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At 12:43:10 PM on 1/1/2002, Jet said:
whoa dude that was well the best thing I read on danspage ever need more!!!!!!!!!!
At 12:30:32 PM on 1/1/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
OMG!!!! THAT STORY TOOK MY BREATH AWAY! Excellent Job Ice! This story provides me with better writing habbits! Great plot and I think the whole love thing is great! Another superb job Ice! From a 1 to a 10 I'd give it a 100!
At 12:27:57 PM on 1/1/2002, taker said:
Sounds class man. I'll read it fully, and then report back with my comments.I'm lokking forward to reading it...
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