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Ice, damn, you should do the fan-fic at UFX also!
At 12:28:52 AM on 7/26/2002, Ambrose said:
;o)
At 12:16:52 AM on 7/26/2002, Dr. Ice said:
<font color=silver>Ok...let me clear that up a bit...it was an 'exercise' for character development...does that work now all might Ambrose
;-)</font>
At 11:53:40 PM on 7/25/2002, Ambrose said:
If this was in a screenplay ICE, the reader would have thrown it away after line 4, if you know what I mean.
:Wink:
"Screenwriter's joke"
At 8:04:12 PM on 7/25/2002, aragorn_8 said:
I too know where you're comming from for the love thing. my story, Come What May (Though it not be as good or serious as this) is also along those lines, and is alos based off a true story.
I'd look forward to you posting the entire thing. if you don't want to, then could you e-mail it to me? I'd really love to read the entire thing.
At 7:43:59 PM on 7/25/2002, Carna {Author} said:
(zips up his pants)
Ahem....great stuff.
At 6:59:18 PM on 7/25/2002, jp3 girl said:
Tyranno... Give me the coffee... *stumbles around room, also drunk from Starbucks*
Er... It was good. The writing was marvelous, truely.
At 2:41:14 PM on 7/25/2002, AG5 [Critic] said:
<font color=Silver>OoOo WeEe, TyrannoRex112 you need to go back to the clinic... if they find out you escaped there's no telling what Nurse Killjoy will do this time around.</font>
At 12:37:16 PM on 7/25/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
*Like in AP*
LIES! LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEES!
LoL ok...I'm over it...But, isn't she a special somebody? Or did you make her up?
*Drinks more coffee*
This crap is gonna stunt my growth...O well.
Well it's good, but I don't think it should be posted here.
O well.
I'm gonna call Gabby.
(GF AHAHA)
At 12:28:29 PM on 7/25/2002, Ice Kenobi said:
<font color=iceblue>LMAO...WTF? HaHa, I will say it again this is an 'extreme dramatization' Its actually a chapter in 'How to write a Screenplay' (a book) which tells you to take an event in your life and dramatize it so0o that you can feel real emotions! So please dont take this too seriously (HaHa)</font>
At 12:26:10 PM on 7/25/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
AND DON'T LIE ICE! I HAVE SEEN YOUR PIC SO DON'T YOU SAY IT WAS THE MOST POPULAR GIRL IN SCHOOL YOU SONOVA.
I'm sorry...I bette get away from Starbucks, but their coffee...OMG! Hyper.
At 12:25:09 PM on 7/25/2002, Ice Kenobi said:
<font color=iceblue>No...this wont be developed into a story...it was just a TEST (LoL)</font>
At 12:24:37 PM on 7/25/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
Um...Who's the lucky gal you stud you?
LoL.
At 10:00:39 AM on 7/25/2002, AG5 [Critic] said:
<font color=Silver>Nicely written. Some of the parts seem a little too dramatic, like Ambrose said, but then again if we transfered our lives onto paper we'd probably be a little over damatic too. If I don't make any sense it's because it's 6:40 AM and I don't think well at this time of day. Anyway, I'm being lazy, but I'll make sure to read "DEFECTION" asap. Again, nicely written and I wouldn't mind seeing this developed into a story. :D</font>
At 9:20:47 AM on 7/25/2002, Jedi A. Malcolm said:
Ice, I know exactly where you're coming from (the whole love thing) and I couldn't have written this any better. Yes, it is different to see something like this here, but I don't think it's *wrong*. Anyway, very nicely done, and I look forward to discovering what happened afterwards.
At 5:37:31 AM on 7/25/2002, Dac said:
Wow
That was...different
At 2:37:53 AM on 7/25/2002, Nick Van Owen said:
Beautiful, truly beautiful.
*wipes tear from eye*
*snaps back to reality*
You could have scored in school. Hehe.
At 2:17:37 AM on 7/25/2002, Ice Kenobi said:
<font color=iceblue>LoL...I know what you mean...</font>
At 2:13:24 AM on 7/25/2002, Ambrose said:
Well to be honest... I don't think DJP3 page is ready for this type of writing. It is beyond fantastic, but that writing style I find TOO dramatic. I would use that in a scene in a Screenplay or a Drama novel, but not here.
Just my thoughts, and opinins, I might be wrong.
Rate - 10/10
At 2:01:30 AM on 7/25/2002, Ice Kenobi said:
<font color=iceblue>Its an attempt to capture true drama through events in my life...I am working on trying to develop real feelings through characters, which I can use in my upcoming work...
I don't expect anyone to really understand what I am writing about or even understnad WHY I wrote it, but I was just curious to see how people would respond to this 'genre' of writing...So0o I posted it</font>
At 1:57:44 AM on 7/25/2002, Ambrose said:
Uhhhh...
Nice job?
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