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I can see you put a lot of effort into this, so I commend you on doing so.
But I honestly think this is a bit boring. You are basically following the exact same storyline as LOTR - the only difference is that the characters have members' names.
Just as a suggestion: I think you should take the story in a slightly new direction, and add your own plot elements, and don't follow Tolkien's books/films too closely. It'll make it a more interesting read.
But yet again, its still pretty good. It could be better.
At 4:21:51 PM on 4/1/2003, JPJunkee said:
Pretty good. I like how you expanded from the film, and created your own scenes.
-- JPJunkee
At 5:40:01 AM on 3/31/2003, Dac said:
I remember working here...
At 12:28:27 AM on 3/31/2003, Dash said:
Yippee! The part I wrote was in here! hehe, great job so far! Keep it up!
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