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means the user is online now! At 11:54:02 PM on 2/25/2003, JPJunkee said: Well. . . . I must say, that there's not that much to comment on. I mean, it was rather short, and it's kinda hard to judge it thus far.
But, from what I've read, it definitely has potential. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing too distracting. But I feel that this is a good set up for the story to come.
Oh, and I'm a General! Cool! Time to kick some ass!
-- JPJunkee
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