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Alright, I read all three so far, but I figured I'd just post my comments once.
It's pretty good so far. The dialogue and character developement may be a bit sketchy (as someone mentioned earlier) but nevertheless, it's very interesting and scientific sounding... you definately seem to know what you're talking about here.
It seems a bit strange that they'd evolve to the forms they had millions of years ago in such little time (especially since the environmental conditions that would make a change like that possible probably do not exist on earth anymore), but hey, what do I know? You've probably figured that part out already, heh...
Alright, I'm gonna wrap this up before I end up making too much of an ass out of myself here... in conclusion, although there seem to be a few loose ends, it's a good story so far, and I can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the good work.
At 3:36:34 AM on 7/9/2002, RaptorHiss said:
Sweet, once again I love the overall mood your putting in this story, it's very scientifcally intriging, which I love to read very much:) Can't wait for the next chapter!
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