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Very good, I'll have to agree with para and not carna:P Althought I don't know if it's entirely scientifically accurate, it makes for an interesting read. The plot is unique, even though we haven't fully found it out yet:) Evolution is so nifty! heh:)
At 4:58:37 AM on 7/7/2002, KillerRaptor said:
Great!
At 8:31:00 AM on 7/6/2002, Carna [Mod] said:
Para is entitled to his opinion, but I think he's way off
The story really isnt much, there isn't even a plot yet. Dialogue is shaky(dont worry, almost all people are bad it), no character development or descriptions. A plus is the mystery involved - which is basically all that intrigued me
CARNARATING -
3/10
At 12:49:59 AM on 7/5/2002, Parasaur.w said:
Ouch, I'm really sorry about not closing my tags. I clicked "Submit Query" before I remembered. :/
At 12:23:17 AM on 7/5/2002, Parasaur.w said:
<font color=orange><center><i>Pete's Mini Reviews</i>
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<font color=gray>I really liked this idea. Very original. Great style of writing. I was really sucked in. However the sequences were slightly jerky, and it seemed almost like you wanted to get this scene over with fast. Its length was disappointing. I found I wanted to keep reading more but it had ended. No noticable grammer/spelling errors. But I'm not a perfect proof-reader and neither is Spell Check. You're off to a <i>very</i> promising start. With some more length to your chapters, this could be GREAT.
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8.9 of 10
At 9:51:22 PM on 7/4/2002, Brad said:
This is one of the best ideas I've seen here. It's good to have a change from the usual setting for dinosaur stories.
At 9:37:50 PM on 7/4/2002, Chaotician said:
You're off to an intriguing start. I'll certainly keep an eye on further installments. :)
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