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means the user is online now! At 6:01:38 AM on 4/23/2002, dark hunter said: thats a pretty nice fanb fic, though as dan said a bit more description needed, but other then that i enjoyed it immensly
~Dark Hunter
At 8:22:49 PM on 4/21/2002, Vader said: <font color=Red>An entertaining read. A suggestion though - a little more description of the enivronment may enhance the experience of the fic. Alot of it is diologue, and inserting some writing about the places the characters are in might be cool.
Just a little suggestion, that's all. Keep up your efforts, :)
<i>-Vader Moderator and Writer of Dan's Page <a href="http://www.dansjp3page.com/fanfic/Vader-SITE_WARS__Episode_III_-_Last_of_the_Admins.asp"><font color=Blue>Last of the Admins - REVISED INTO NOVEL with Author Interviews</i></a></font>
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