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means the user is online now! At 2:03:21 AM on 11/19/2003, dark hunter said: Nicely done, a bit extreme in the attacks but nicely described. I found it a tad short but maybe it was because it held my attention.
I thought it strange that Muldoon would go back for the raptors, i dunno, i was always anticipating him going back then trudging through the jungle after them.
Hmmm.
Not bad at all the violence was a nice touch and the whole thing was nicely done.
7/10
~Dark Hunter
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