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means the user is online now! At 9:38:20 AM on 6/19/2003, Amber said: hmmmm..... predictable story....
to fast.....
you should set up spome background.. let us get to know the characters....
the action is already here.. way to fast...
At 3:36:21 AM on 6/9/2003, Timmy Murphy said: It's ok. Each scene are very short. I think you need to start explaing whats going on because otherwise we'll get too confused and it'll get boring and we'd stop reading.
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