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means the user is online now! At 10:20:21 PM on 9/20/2002, yvonne said: Hmmm, I don't know. Maybe you should email Dan and ask him for some help. Make sure you give him as many details as you can and provide a link to your story, also.
At 5:19:45 PM on 9/20/2002, Dino-dave said: Yes I tried that but it was reposted instead of being edited. Broken link or something?
At 4:24:27 PM on 9/20/2002, yvonne said: You're welcome. :)
You know you can edit it if you want to, right? You wouldn't have to repost it again or anything. Just find it listed on the fanfic page and click Edit.
At 2:21:11 PM on 9/19/2002, Dino-dave said: Thanks Yvonne for your useful comments and encouragement.
At 1:45:03 PM on 9/19/2002, yvonne said: That was refreshingly entertaining, Dino_dave. I had never thought about what Jophrey might have done before the dreaded Raptor attack. Very imaginative and cool.
And the writing style is good, too. Although I would put some blank lines between some of the longer paragraphs. As a reader, I find it easier to read smaller paragraphs.
Good job, though. :)
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