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means the user is online now! At 12:29:17 PM on 5/20/2003, Darth Chicken said: Thank's for the comments guys. :)
I'm glad you gave some critisism too. I'm not to experienced at writing stories but hopefully it will get better.
I'll have the 1st chapter posted tonight.
At 1:22:37 AM on 5/19/2003, JPJunkee said: Wayyy. . . too short. What you were trying to portray was good. I got a good sense of the man's fear and dismay. But, you really need to read over it more before you post it. There were more than a few misspelled words and poor grammar use was abundant throughout. It was just too short to really judge, though. I may read more, just to see what the story is about. But I must say, the thing I liked the most, was the quote at the beginning.
-- JPJunkee
At 7:38:43 PM on 5/18/2003, MuldoonLives15 said: I wonder what was after him...
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