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“Go… to the school. I’ll watch your ass.”
THAT'S what every girl wants to hear! hehe. . . hmm
Nice chapter, Mark. The thing between the angel and the demon was nice, as were the feelings and stuff expressed by Andria when she got herself into that little predicament. Denis is cool too, I liked the way he finished off the hellhound, cool and mean! Good chapter, I look forward to the next.
-- JPJunkee
At 9:11:42 PM on 11/13/2003, dark hunter said:
Hmm seemed to me to be extremely short, however when i went back and had another look it's actually a nice length, it just seemed short because i was reading so fast...hehe, the sign of a good writer, making time fly!
I loved Denis in this chapter, he was really harsh to that hellhound, but in a good way. His character just seems to be an awesome one. As does Andria's who seems to have had a lot of effort put into developing her.
Rating: 9/10
~Dark Hunter
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