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Good stuff! I liked the bit with the hellhounds, nice suspense, and the whole time I was thinking that Denis would probably get killed or something. . . That still might happen though! hehe
And the Devil is an evil sonofabitch that laughs too much. I don't like him. God on the other hand, well, he's just got a really booming voice. I like him. . . . And now the war has officially begun, so the next couple chapters should be pretty interesting!
-- JPJunkee
At 9:25:48 AM on 9/22/2003, dark hunter said:
Nice.
Small spelling problems such as "liquids" instead of liquid, and "puss" instead of pus i dunno why, but this just got to me.
The action was very nice, in fact it seemed as if this is what this chapter was devoted for, action. That and the knowledge that hell and heaven are coming to earth. Oooooh.
Awesome chapter. Though a little lacking on development side, the action made up for this.
Rating: 8/10
~Dark Hunter
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