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For Aragorn, I just checked out that script, and it's not the copy I recieved. I have a hard copy of the real script.
At 12:40:20 PM on 4/22/2003, Aragorn said:
The script is up at www.simplyscripts.com in the movie scripts section.
At 2:55:07 PM on 4/21/2003, Crisco said:
thanks, i got the same advice from someone else.. ill take the hint, i think one of the problems is is that i am making it up as i go along, and then when i get an idea i try to write it down quickly, then not putting enough detail, thanks alot for the advice
At 1:31:42 AM on 4/21/2003, TBatman said:
Okay, I just finished reading the four parts you've got posted. I can tell it's probably your first time writting---it's not bad, you've got your ideas in pretty good shape and you've got a decent hold on the story. But I, personally, would expand on it a lot more. Pretend the audience doesn't know a damned thing about the world of Batman. Tell them that Gotham city is, "a twisted image of urban America, a world subterranean in its aspect, almost surreal in it's oppressiveness"---you know what I mean?
Explain to them that Bruce is fighting a war--a war on crime to avenge the deaths of his parents and to make sure that no eight year old child shall never witness the death of innocence again--explain to them Alfred Pennyworth has been a "father-figure" for Bruce since his parents died. More details, more descriptions, more depth, post a comment and I'll get back to you if you need any more of my interjections.
P.S. I can't alott "The Frightening" script to anyone legally, sorry.
At 12:00:36 PM on 4/20/2003, Crisco said:
yea, i just picked up a batman book at the library and had an urge to write a fan fic, he's my favorite super hero and i loved the original cartoon on WB, i haven't read The Frightening script by Nolan, i just REALLY liked the name, and since scarecrow is in my fanfic i chose the name to use, i would much appreciate it if u commmented on the story, and if u could email Nolan's script...
eataflinstones88@aol.com
At 11:08:35 AM on 4/20/2003, TBatman said:
Okay, first off--I'm the biggest Batman fan there is, and since I've read the first draft for the movie script that will be based off of Chris Nolan and David Goyer's "The Frightening", I'll probably be interested in reading what you've got here. I write full fledged Batman novels myself, and my most recent, which collaborates the DC and Marvel worlds (Batman/Spider-Man) it's on the verge of getting published, called, "Nightfall"---but I legally can't disclose anymore information than that.
But I find your picks for characters seemingly well, though I love Colin Farrell, I have lately been seeing David Boreanaz [Angel] as a top notch choice. The rest of them may work, but there's someone in the cast that doesn't seem right--but I can't put my finger on it. And is this your version of the "Frightening" storyline? Or is it based on the recently published and widespread WB's "Frightening" screenplay? But anyway, I'll give it a read and give you my opinion--and I have a strong one, knowing just about everything about ol' batsy...
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