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Nice and witty, good stuff. The geeks and Hammond being the best part of this chapter, I liked that a lot. Mark's dialogue had me giggling each time he spoke, hehe. Keep it up!
At 9:06:25 PM on 2/16/2004, JPfan4life said:
Oohh, a cliffhanger! you got me all excited for part 5! :) Good job and funny as usual!
At 10:44:55 AM on 2/13/2004, CeratosPit said:
We can only hope, DH. For now at least, it's just setting up the characters...
At 8:00:20 AM on 2/13/2004, dark hunter said:
Very Funny Ceratos, i enjoyed it just like the oher chapters. Could this story actually have an indepth storyline?
~Dark Hunter
At 11:54:20 PM on 2/12/2004, Jurassiclaw said:
Stand up comic is right up your alley.
At 11:11:56 PM on 2/12/2004, CeratosPit said:
Hey all. Hope you enjoyed this chapter. I devoted it a little bit more to story progression than I did to jokes about Billy getting slammed in the nuts. sPeaking of which, what's more fun than the deleted scenes section of your favorite DVD? Why the deleted scenes section of you 8th favorite fanfic! This one! So here's a bit that I decided to take out of the story...
"What does race have to do with one's ability to attract women?" Wu asked.
“Well, plenty if it means you’ve got a cocktail weenie in your pants.” Dennis shrugged.
“WHAT!?”
“Hey, relax dude! I’m sure you’re well hung back in the far-east where the women have small breasts and asses, but--”
“That’s just a stupid racist stereotype that keeps the Asian community down! Contrary to what you may believe, Dennis, we’re not a bunch of rice and cat eating bucktoothed, sexually inadequate ninjas with a knack for massaging and dry cleaning! Sure my cousins are, but they’re just a small percentage. So I would appreciate it if you shut your face up, you obnoxious bastard!”
“You know what, Henry? I’m sorry, you’re absolutely right.” Dennis apologized. “How can I put down the people who came up with ‘Me So Horny! Me Ruv You Rong Time!’”
And then, accompanied by a hackneyed battle cry, Wu delivered a karate chop to one of Dennis’ many chins.
Now, aside from containing a bunch of racist crap, the reason I took out this little confrontational piece between Wu & Nedry was I wanted to stay away from penis jokes. Not because I'm developing taste, but because I have have even more coming up pertaining to a different character. Throwing this in would just be overkill.
See ya next week!
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