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means the user is online now! At 10:50:34 PM on 5/4/2003, Carnotaur3 said: Bah, those were just the slurred up words of Jon.
At 1:21:19 AM on 5/3/2003, Carnotaur3 said: You see, you keep saying errors and I've reread the whole thing and haven't found any. You mind pointing them out for me, if you can.
At 10:18:12 PM on 5/2/2003, JPJunkee said: That was an okay chapter, not the best though, not by far. It started out good enough, but as it progressed it became rather dull and lacking in feeling and believable human emotion. The dialogue was also a bit. . . poor. And towards the end, it seemed as though you weren't even trying anymore. Errors became frequent occurrences.
Still, overall it was an enjoyable read.
-- JPJunkee
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