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Hehe, thanks, Yvonne! :D
At 2:37:12 AM on 1/3/2003, yvonne said:
It really is eerie how you can picture Hannibal saying the very things you wrote. Very chilling.
You are very good at writing horror/thriller stories, C3. I wish you luck with this, mostly because I want to read every chapter of it. :)
At 2:12:03 AM on 1/3/2003, Carnotaur3 said:
Thanks Veder :)
At 2:03:06 AM on 1/3/2003, Vader said:
You have a good writing style that portrays everything so you can visuallize you. FANTASTIC job in writing Lecter's dialogue - it fit him perfectly.
Keep it up! :D
At 1:12:00 AM on 1/3/2003, Carnotaur3 said:
Prequel to Red Dragon. Takes place in the 70s although not mentioned at all.So you know at the end nobody will still not know who is doing the cannibalistic killings. Which brings a lot of ideas to your head doesn't it?
At 12:05:58 AM on 1/3/2003, JPJunkee said:
Good job on the dialogue. You really did write Lecter surprisingly well. And you really made George's drug effects knwon, and they were shown well with his constant laughter.
There were a few gramatical errors here and there, but overall it was pretty damn good.
A good begining, to a promising story.
-- JPJunkee
At 9:17:28 PM on 1/2/2003, Vito_The_White said:
Wow! that was a really great beginning. I loved how you started this. However, is this a prequel to Red Dragon, or a sequel to Hannibal, or something that happens in between Silence of the Lambs and Hannibal, or something between Red Dragon and Silence of the Lambs? I'm a bit confused about that.
However, I loved your character development and dialogue. And when I can actually hear Hannibal's voice saying what you've writen down for him, I know that it is good and Hannibal Lecter matrial. I can't wait for the next part. Good job man:)
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