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Awesome chapter! The action was very exciting. Great work! =D
At 7:25:58 PM on 2/5/2004, Spinoboy11 said:
Sorry for the major delay, everybody.
First of all...superb job.
Chapter 4 was a tad better than this one, but that happens all of the time. Anyway...
Dialogue: Being a Terminator fan is a great thing for your fan fic, Chase. You seem to write every individual's traits and feelings as you've seen the trilogy hundreds and hundreds of times. This is the most important part of writing a story, in my opinion, and boy did you knock this category out with your characters' actions. As usual, and w/o sucking up, I give this section a 9.5/10.
Grammar: Not much here, but it seems inevitable you'll have a couple of mistakes here and there. But considering you tried your best, this section gets a 9/10
Action: This is 'Saving Private Ryan' war futuristic style. Kate's seem to have gotten a lot more tougher, reminiscent to Sarah Connor's character from T1 to T2. The pain and agony she's feeling fits well with the war sequences. The T-400s are formidable and potent foes. This was the most exciting category of part 5 IMO. A job well done, Kuertz. 10/10
Final Spine-O-Rating: 9.5/10
-Spinoboy11
At 11:33:19 PM on 1/16/2004, Carnotaur3 said:
Why, thank you, lago.
Your comment is certainly appreciated. :)
At 6:13:32 PM on 1/16/2004, Lagosuchus said:
Finally, I see some of the better, more interesting writing on the board.
At 11:11:58 PM on 12/15/2003, Carnotaur3 said:
Thanks, Mark! :D
At 11:16:23 AM on 12/14/2003, Mark said:
Cool! i liked it i finally caught up on reading it all and i find it a good read :D keep it up
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