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Awesome chapter! I really enjoyed it. I'm glad you brought Enrique into it. =)
At 10:27:05 PM on 12/2/2003, Spinoboy11 said:
This chapter was great. Yet, another ingenious inclusion to this fan fiction. Already, this has become one of the most excellent non-JP fan fictions of all-time, IMO. You started off strong, and kept the continuity of the storyline throughout the entire chapter. Your scenes are just terrific, and once again great details on John and Kate's actions. They fit their movie counterparts very well. The T-400s scene brought some action and was unpredictable of what was going to happen. Bringing in Enrique was a great idea as you brought back an old character. I loved this chapter. I also loved John and Jameson’s conversation. Very well done.
Spine-O-Rating:
Pros: Great writing, new character, character traits and actions, very detailed in every scene, voice-overs, John’s escape scene
Cons: I’m not kidding, but none here. Flawless.
Overall: 10/10
At 5:54:30 PM on 10/25/2003, IngenRaptor said:
Great story
good to see Enrique again
At 12:02:27 AM on 10/25/2003, theriddler said:
Another great part. I liked the part where John escapes. This story is great. get the next part up as soon as you can.
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