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Awesome work! I liked the battle scenes!
At 7:37:57 AM on 10/4/2003, TyrannoRex112 said:
Pretty cool, anticipating the next part!
At 5:09:48 PM on 9/27/2003, tobycompy2.0 said:
Good work, not exactly the script I would pick for T4, but it had a few things that I enjoyed. A few problems I had that you'll get in the review.
FINAL RATING:
C+
At 7:38:17 PM on 9/25/2003, Seth Rex said:
good story so far. i'm a little interested in how john's going t fend of the T-X this time around, but i assume you have something up your sleeves. This seems very exciting and i anticipate good things from the future.
At 5:52:32 PM on 9/25/2003, Carnotaur3 said:
:/
At 5:31:03 PM on 9/25/2003, Jurassiclaw said:
My 2nd sentence is fucked up. So no 'Yo bitch! Ya cant spell!' bullshit.
At 5:30:12 PM on 9/25/2003, Jurassiclaw said:
The Terminator series ended in 1991.
It sucks more or less as much than the average Hollywood movie. But since it's a fanfic... pretty good.
At 10:05:23 PM on 9/23/2003, Spinoboy11 said:
Dude, this story is the bomb. Excellent job, man. The action sequences and your ability to give the characters
'life' in the chapter make this story seem flawless. John and Kate fit the exact description of their characters from Terminator 3...and this is a very great advantage for this fan fic's success.
On a second note, I'm really impressed by the way you described the machines and the entire battle scene. The hospital sequence is very dramatic and adds a great sense of reality to the story.
The script form idea perfectly fits the story. Good choice. The only problem I really saw in this chapter was the word 'victims' was spelled victems...but who gives a crapola?
10/10
At 9:58:56 PM on 9/23/2003, Carnotaur3 said:
That depends on when I can get everything all ready.
Thanks for the comment.
At 9:49:45 PM on 9/23/2003, IngenRaptor said:
Pretty Damn good, Very entertaining
Whens the next part come out?
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