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Thanks goys for your comments.
At 1:45:48 AM on 6/14/2002, yvonne said:
I liked the funny twist, but maybe the wording was a little off ... not really sure. I don't like the word "piss", but it was still funny. :)
It's very cool to see the characters come to life with someone else's vision. Good job, Carnotaur3 :)
At 2:36:14 AM on 6/13/2002, dark hunter said:
that ending was great, like the brachiosaur sneeze in JP. Great work
~Dark Hunter
At 11:07:53 PM on 6/11/2002, Chavez said:
slash my first comment. I just noticed the part 1
At 11:05:57 PM on 6/11/2002, AlanGrant5 said:
Pretty good work C3. Added an element of comedy, which was nice. Not the best work I've read from you, but it's definitly entertaining. :)
At 11:03:15 PM on 6/11/2002, Chavez said:
i liked episode 1 better, it was longer and more detailed.But i do like the story as a whole so far.
At 11:38:07 AM on 6/11/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
I sure didn't make the plot up I'm just going with what Carna and Yvonne came up with. Thanks though! :)
At 2:03:07 AM on 6/11/2002, Vader said:
Well this one had a bit more comedy than previous installments and the diologue was pretty good. However, I feel for this Series to have power to continue on, the plot needs to involve some very original elements.
Don't get me wrong - its entertaining and all. But I think that if you are going to have several episodes, the simple plot of someone crashing on an island won't sustain an entire series. So I think you should think up at least one element to encorperate into it that is highly original.
Just a suggestion. :) This was an entertaining and fun episode - good work.
-Vader
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