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nice work, pretty involved and very nicely done
~Dark Hunter
At 7:01:46 PM on 5/1/2002, Vader said:
<font color=Red>Here is that review I wrote on the MB previously when you gave me the sneek peek, which I'll leave as a comment. :)
<i>The plot is similar to other JP4s in a way, involving the bommbing of Nublar, rumors of dinos running loose in Costa Rica, and the investigation of the dissapearance of a man.
The highlight of what I read was a meeting of a detective and an informant in a cafe in Costa Rica. The diologue and descriptions reminded me of Crichton's style in the JP novel, although they aren't quite as in depth.
With effort and good writing, this fan-fic could turn out to be a good one. My only suggestion to the writers is to make sure that the story and its characters don't waver too close to repeating other JP4 stories that have been on this site as they continue to write. Do the best you can to keep the material fresh, and you'll have a good, enjoyable fic on your hands.
I shall reserve a rating for the fic once I read more.</i>
<i>-Vader
Moderator and Writer of Dan's Page
<a href="http://www.dansjp3page.com/fanfic/Vader-SITE_WARS__Episode_IV_-_The_Dark_Veil.asp"><font color=White>The Dark Veil - REVISED INTO NOVEL with Author Interviews</i></a></font>
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