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hope i wsan't too harsh, those scenes were excellent and a killer opening but an obvios and repetitive ending
At 8:42:15 AM on 5/7/2003, aussiejpfan said:
absolutely excellent. i would love to see that in a movie. however although it was knew nearly the whole script was a cheap copy of a scene in the other three., meeting ian on the train, kid tagging along in the vehicle, man, boy and girl fall asleep in a tree(happy moment), stumble over abandened buildingf with incubators, signal a chopper for help, get stuck in a cage while being attacked,. There's also the fact that it just went from a scene of dinosaurs attacking to another scene of dinosoars attacking with no real plot whatsoever and not enough time for some decent acting.
If it was submitted before lost world and jp3(which really stunk) than it would have been dinamite. Scale it down and use some original pieces and ideas and you'll make a million from it.
At 10:37:21 PM on 3/29/2003, Aragorn said:
Classic Triceratops vs Rex! Gotta love it!
At 12:15:04 PM on 10/12/2002, JPJunkee said:
Really, really good job! The rex and triceratops battle is something I've always wanted to be in a JP fic or movie. But sadly, is tough to find, in most stories. But, I really liked how you wrote that fight into this Part. And, for some reason, I just really liked that part with the Baryonyx. Maybe, it's because he wasn't displayed as a villian. I'm not sure.
Anyway, great job! I can't wait to read the next Part!
-- JPJunkee
At 11:50:20 AM on 10/12/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
Thanks...I'll be sure to fix those mistakes, I've already noticed a couple.
At 1:57:41 AM on 10/12/2002, Aragorn said:
Awsome! Some spelling mistakes. AT the cliff part, I thought there were going to be pteranodons there, even though you told me before they wern't gonna be in it, lol.
Good job!
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