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means the user is online now! At 1:17:27 AM on 1/20/2002, Ambrose said: Hi again old pal,
SUGGESTIONS:
AWSOME dialogue, still i suggest you edit it a bit. Some of the things the narrator says is a lil corny, but thats okay. This is just an opinion, What i want you to do now is become TROY. Talk to Dodgson as if you where talkin to your buddies or friends ay work. Dialogue can be a pain in the ass, but this is very important, dialogue is like the spine of the story.
At 6:43:34 PM on 1/15/2002, Carnotaur3 said: Thanks Carna. I'm going to review your ICETERIA soon, so be ready! :)
At 6:42:35 PM on 1/15/2002, CarnaRaptor said: Good work Carno
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