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Well carno 3 I read your post called "I Hate This" and i felt bad :o(. I know how you feel, when people don't read your fics. It sucks ass! And those highly popular fics are over promoted. so i took the time to read this intro. I'm actually going to read all 3 parts of this fan fic. I'm going to help you make a name for yourself in the fan fics.
Suggestions for INTRO:
Okay, let's start.
*One, your intro is way to short, i mean way way way way too short. Try to write this intro in real detail. Because if poeple don't get sucked in right away chances are they wont give a damn about your story. I suggest you delet this INTRO and rewrite it. I know you might think i'm nuts, but you really should. Since this is told as a narration, try to base your narrator's speech like yours. what would you say, what would you tell your reader about your experiance?
Try it.
-Ambrose
At 9:40:18 PM on 1/14/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
Kinda is. I though up Roy Orbison and just put his last name in it. His 2 sons went to my school. He had a ver depressing life! :(
At 9:32:09 PM on 1/14/2002, Mr Goodbytes said:
Sounds good.
P.S. The name Troy Orbison wouldn't be a tribute to the singer Roy Orbison would it?
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