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Thanks Vito! :D
At 6:32:38 PM on 1/20/2002, Vito Hardy said:
Sorry it took me soooo long to comment on this story man. I really like this prequel to Jurassic Park Evolution wasn't it called? Speaking of that story sorry I didn't comment on the last few chapters of that. They were really good but I didn't have time to comment. I wasn't even supposed to be on the internet anyway. So good job man.
At 3:35:28 PM on 1/20/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
LOL
At 3:30:38 PM on 1/20/2002, Ambrose said:
Okay note: if nobody reads your post, don't give up, just bump the hell out of it.
At 2:42:24 PM on 1/20/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
SWEET! I'll do that now!!!
At 2:22:06 PM on 1/20/2002, Ambrose said:
good, now go to the MB and promote your FAN FIC. Create a Post and clearly explain what the story is about, DONT ASK ANYONE TO COMMENT!!! Just jazz it up and explain each [art, like sumarize. and tell peopel to get ready for PART5. COz its gonna rock!
At 1:32:35 PM on 1/20/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
Ok I found some errors but nothing to prevent anybody from not reading the story. Man, I'm having trouble thinking of what to do for Part 5 LOL.
At 1:22:47 PM on 1/20/2002, Ambrose said:
oh spell check blows, computers can't check for sentence structure and word usage. That is why i never use it, i always re-read my to make sure it makes sense. Thats what i would do.
-Ambrose
At 1:15:13 PM on 1/20/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
I have spell check and it's not saying anything.
At 12:17:10 PM on 1/20/2002, Ambrose said:
SUGGESTIONS:
Okay, don't think i'm being an ass i just want to help you.For now on i want you to carefully re-read each PART for spelling errors. Coz that might be the reason why nobody is reading your stuff. ;o)
Very good raptor scene, i like how everyone acted during the situation. very good work. Keep it up and don't let anyone tell you to stop writting. Just keep writting, and if nobody reads your stuff, they just miss out ;o)
-Ambrose
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