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means the user is online now! At 12:30:32 AM on 7/31/2003, Carnotaur3 said: Yeah, GORDON and COMMISSIONER GORDON can really confuse people. Sorry for that.
At 11:53:34 PM on 7/30/2003, JPJunkee said: That was one of the more enjoyable and better chapters of the story. I liked the exchange between Commissioner Gordon and his brother, though, it was a little confusing with his brother’s dialogue only being marked as "GORDON". . . . I thought the Commissioner was talking to himself at first. Also the little part with Deludion and Bruce was pretty good. The story is gradually improving. . . .
-- JPJunkee
At 9:26:26 PM on 7/17/2003, HBK said: Very good for a Batman fic. The dialogue is well done and intriguing.
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