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Well, I thought that Greg was a goner for sure. Glad to see him squeak by. :) I have a two complaints though. I can't really understand why Gabby doesn't finally believe that there are ghosts in the house. I mean, there's all of those professional ghost people in the house, with technical devices. She should have come around a little by now. And I was surprised by Dan's treatment of Robert, there in the end. I had thought that Dan respected the man, up til the point when he told him to get his ass out of his house. That was a little off for Dan's character, but maybe that's what you were going for, since it looks as though the ghosts are trying to take over Dan. It's still a good story though. I'm enjoying it. :)
At 10:55:37 PM on 4/4/2002, Mr Goodbytes said:
Dang! I thought sure Greg was a dead man! Very scary! Gabby needs to open her eyes.
At 10:53:29 PM on 4/4/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
Damn, Toby! I didn't mean to do it. I can't fix it. But this comments thing is for my fan-fic! So I suggect next time post the comment.
At 10:38:07 PM on 4/4/2002, tobycompy2.0 said:
<font color=Brick red>God, Carno, control your posts, now the whole board's one liners is black before they were all red, then green, now fix it, fix your HTML its pissin me off! Sorry</font>
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-What You Just Witnessed Was The Bite Of The Compy. Goodnight.</font>
<font color=Skkyblue>26 Days Until Return To The Castle - May 1st</font>
<a href=http://www.dansjp3page.com/fanfic/tobycompy2.0-The_Following_Evil_Trilogy__Wolf_Hunt.asp> The Following Evil Trilogy: Wolf Hunt</a>
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