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Sorry about the delay, but I've finally been able to find the time to read parts 4-9. So, here we go...
Nick and Greg are two good additions to the plot. They seem likable. I hope they can help Dan and Gabby. And when Robert transferred his visions to Dan, it gave me slight shivers. Good job.
At 10:54:52 PM on 4/3/2002, dark hunter said:
this was one freaky chapter, very nicely written
~Dark Hunter
At 1:03:56 PM on 4/3/2002, Mr Goodbytes said:
Freaky!!! Excellent job!!!
At 10:04:11 PM on 4/2/2002, Vader said:
Well I'm new to this story, I haven't read the previous chapters. But I will make sure to! I can tell you put much into this, good job. :D
<i>-Vader
Moderator and Writer of Dan's Page
<a href="http://www.dansjp3page.com/fanfic/Vader-SITE_WARS__Episode_I_-_A_New_Menace.asp"><font color=Blue>Site Wars: A New Menace - REVISED INTO NOVEL with Special Features</i></a></font>
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