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means the user is online now! At 5:58:56 AM on 4/1/2002, dark hunter said: it's pretty freaky man, but very well written
At 10:40:11 PM on 3/31/2002, yvonne said: I wasn't sure why Dan would get so mad at Gabby, when she told him he needed help. There really wasn't any buildup shown in Dan, for him to get so angry at her. Maybe its just me though. :)
Anyway, good story. I just wish there was a little more to each part. It's like after you start to read it, it just ends. And then when the next part is up, I have a little bit of a hard time getting back into the suspense part of it. But I still manage.
yvonne
At 4:18:09 PM on 3/30/2002, Mr Goodbytes said: Creepy, very creepy. I love this story. The door knob scene was very intence.
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