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A promising start to a great series. Good job writer(s). Hope to see more soon. :)
At 3:11:19 PM on 5/26/2002, IngenRaptor said:
alright I was hopeing it would be better but i'll keep reading
At 2:32:07 PM on 5/26/2002, Neelis said:
Hey, I started another Mission: Isla Sorna storie. Without your character, but with my own characters. Later they can meet eachother, I hope. Well, just enjoy.
By the way, I like the start. Nice dan, especially that when he hears something in the jungle. My mind went grazy. what's around there? Keep writing!
At 5:16:51 AM on 5/25/2002, dark hunter said:
great work, it was very well done, about the no dialogue thing, check out my short story Jurassic Park: Chaos, i wrote that with no dialogue what so ever, it worked well:)
enough about me:)
That had just the right amount of suspense to keep me very interested, nicely done
~Dark Hunter
At 11:28:47 PM on 5/24/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
Ah, yes, you kept my rodent.
LOL :P
At 8:31:17 PM on 5/24/2002, yvonne said:
Good start. A likeable character was introduced and you got him on the island very quickly. I like it so far. ;)
At 7:11:41 PM on 5/24/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
It doesnt necessarily set the tone for chronicles - but this will be an integral part of the story later on.
As for length, its kinda hard makin a story with no dialogue yaknow?
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