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A very good read. You've done a great job introducing John Arnold. I can't wait to see the next installment. Good job Carna!
At 2:16:55 AM on 6/18/2002, RaptorHiss said:
Very Very Original!!! You've gone completly back to the starting points of every character, and it's working flawlessly:)
I can't wait till the next segment!
At 6:24:21 PM on 6/17/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
Wow thanks for the strong comments
and nick, i hope to release the chapters in 4 day intervals...
At 4:48:58 PM on 6/17/2002, Nick Van Owen said:
I mean chap 3...
At 2:07:01 PM on 6/17/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
Great*
At 2:06:43 PM on 6/17/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
Greg job Carna. You've gotten better than I expected.
At 11:19:17 AM on 6/17/2002, Jurassic_Justin said:
Awesome...just awesome. The dialogue was great, so was the character interaction. I have a VERY good feeling this will be the best fic this summer.
Grade: A
At 3:48:23 AM on 6/17/2002, PunkNerd said:
damn dude.. great stuff you are really a great Writer!
official punknerd rating: A
At 10:45:28 PM on 6/16/2002, Vader said:
Great writing, the details are fantastic, and the the diologue is exceptional. Keep it up! :)
<i>-Vader
Admin and Writer of Dan's Page
<a href="http://www.dansjp3page.com/fanfic/Vader-Leviathans__Special_Edition_-_Feature_Presentation.asp"><font color=Orange>LEVIATHANS: SPECIAL EDITION</a></i></font>
At 9:20:10 PM on 6/16/2002, Nick Van Owen said:
Loving it. Is Chap 4 already written? If so (or not) when will it be released?
At 9:12:57 PM on 6/16/2002, Brad said:
I'm really interested in this story- if this installment wasn't here, I would have asked you how it was coming! John Arnold's history! This has to be the most detailed JP prequel ever made.
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